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    "Allright everyone!!! Quiet please." Luna sighed, Earth had agreed to allow everyone to go sightseeing in his planet; the planets however where being too rowdy. "SHE SAID QUIET!!" Ah, trusty Venus to the rescue, no more threats were needed after this everyone was silent as Luna gave the instructions and rules about this visit. 

`````` In another place

    "This is called a mall, or shopping center, in c/n, keep in mind that every country in this world has a different culture. Therefore a store will vary from place to place. . . " Jupiter looked around the place as Luna guided towards the entrance, giving out final instructions. He wandered inside looking at all the things humans used. Eventually he came to an odd place, the shelves were full of cloth made items. Jupiter frowned at the odd things, they had two odd hollow round things. He took one in his hands wondering what they could be. He would just have to ask Luna or Earth later, as he turned to leave he saw a girl looking at him intently with an odd look. He turned to face the girl who he thought was very pleasant to look at. E/c irises turned to look at his face and she opened her mouth

    "Are you looking for a present for your girlfriend?" She asked, still looking at him with an that odd expression.

    "No, I don't have a girlfriend. Why?" Jupiter asked curious about this girl who he thought was pretty.

    "Oh, then why are you looking at girl's bras?" She asked, and before Jupiter could stop himself he responded

    "Is that what they're called?! But what are they for?" The girl's face turned from shock to disbelief at what he said and Jupiter panicked a little on the inside, Luna had clearly said that humans were not allowed to know who they really were. 
    "You don't know what a bra is!?!?!?! You've got to be kidding me!" The pretty girl said startled, Jupiter shook his head. No he wasn't kidding with her and he really didn't know. The girl looked him up and down determining wheter he was telling the truth or not. Deciding he was being honest her cheeks turned slightly red, in turn making Jupiters own cheeks turn red.

    "A bra is . . . underwear. . . for girl-" "JUPITER!!!!" Mars ran up to Jupiter and interrupted the girl's explanation. Jupiter faced Mars, unknown to him, a killer aura was being emited from Jupiter's entire being. "Yes Mars?" Jupiter said calmly with the dark aura still around him. You meanwhile had been shaken from your daze, this tall handsome guy had done something to you to make you dazed. Shaking your head you walked off after hearing them call each other Mars, and Jupiter. Probably some weird college kids you mused as you walked off. But you couldn't help and look back at them, they had spiked your curiousity, specially the guy that called himself Jupiter. . . You somehow felt like you knew him, or where similar to him. Shaking your head and walking away you still couldn't help but think about him. You wondered what his real name was.

    "So-o-o-rr-y Jupiter, but Luna says we have to go. She's taking us to see the man made wonders of Earth's house!!! I finally get to explore Earth's house!!! He explored my house for a long time, now it's-" Jupiter clamped a hand on top of Mars' mouth as he turned to where he thought you still were. When he didn't see you he clenched his hand around Mars' throat in a friendly squeeze.

    "Mars, you scared her off." Jupiter said calmly again, Mars squealed and struggled.    

    "I'm sorry Jupiter I don't know what I did butpleasedon'tturnmeintoanothershoemakerlevi!!!!!" Mars said hurriedly, Jupiter let him go and patted him on the back, containing his frustation. You had made him curious, he didn't know much about human girls and until know he hadn't cared to but you had piked his curiousity. He wouldn't mind getting to know you, but he remebered that there were billions and billions of humans on earth. How could he find you again?

Well, I tried. Happy Birthday SaeLinLee, I hope this wasn't too much of a fail.
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DEATHLOVENOTES Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I suppose it's too late for me to do the first Jupiter one huh? Oh well ^^ I did the first planetary moe reader insert tho ^^
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Kagamiaoi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Writer
Oh you did?!?!?!!? I want to read it!!! I think there should be more PM inserts out there don't you? :3 Well thanks for reading and well I may have done the first Jupiter insert but you can write better pieces!!!
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DEATHLOVENOTES Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^ thanks~! I go to the same group as you. ^^ Pluto x reader was the first one ^^
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Kagamiaoi Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Writer
I'll definately look for it!!! I look forward to reading it! ;3
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DEATHLOVENOTES Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yey~! ^^
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SaeLinLee Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yet another present?! Aww, you make me speechless, I don't know what to say... I love you, Onee-chan! :iconcryfireverplz:
And this story was awesome, it made my laugh! :D
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Kagamiaoi Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my thank heavens I thought for a minute that I had butchered Jupiter!!! I'm really glad you like it!!! Happy birthday!! I hope the rest of the day is awesome for you!!!
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SaeLinLee Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No, not at all! And aww, thank you, and don't worry about it! x3 I'm sorry that I've been so inactive T^T
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Kagamiaoi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Writer
Oh you don't have to worry about it at all I just hope that you get better and that you are fine!!! :3
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SaeLinLee Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Alright, I'm really happy about it, then!
...And we both have a new dad now, that I only have because of my other older sister xD
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